Talk:Devils sanity ch.1: patient number 335/@comment-5101683-20171123005607

I'll be honest. I was expecting something far worse than what you actually wrote. My ability to analyze this may be insufficient, so I might not be very helpful.

I think the story is good, insofar as I can't really tell what's going to happen, but I feel engaged. The characters seem well-defined, and the writing is far from terrible. I think the only problem is the punctuation at points, so I will fix it.

I think Part 1 is a good story so far.